Writing for experiments
"So, to move on, I took the mixture out of a feed flask to a reactor flask. That’s where all of the yeast was. I also changed the pump rate to a setpoint. Every minute, I had a look at how much carbon dioxide came out of the reaction flask, and I used a ..." "I set up this interesting experiment to run over roughly 24 hours. At the end of the fermentation, I measured the solution ..." These are the extracts from a chemistry student lab report. While the grammar and the meaning are correct, the style needs some fixing. Please, chose one of the fragments above ^^^ and rewrite it in proper style.